[Visual] A long story.

O.K here's a little long story, I'm not giving descriptions very much.

The phone rang loudly, Fluffy rolled his chair and picked it up.
'Damn, It i was sleeping, btw, How's speaking'
'This is glitter bear, or bear stores. I have caught  suspects and 1 of them is stealing my groceries.'
'I'm on my way FATTY!

Fluffy reached G.B's shop.
There was G.b himself, assistant Pretty the parrot, Zimba, Wolfy, Snovy, Fuzzy, Naff and Toddy.
Fluffy pointed to G.b' So, are these the ones, JOE?'
'My name isn't Joe.
'SHUT UP!'

Ok, Johny is Wolfy, Zimba's JAck, Snovvy's Dick, Fuzzy's Jill, Naff's Bill, Toddy's Bob, Pretty's Chipper-Chapper and G.b You're Joe.

'Continue'
Fluffy inspected everyone.
O.K, he came to his conclusion.

Toddy was about to go.
"no one goes till i say so, BOB!
Toddy took out a gun and in the mean while Fluffy shot him.
He started crying.
'You're wearing a bullet-proof thing, BOB!'
''HOW THE FU****G HELL DO YOU KNOW THAT FLUFFY?'
'I'm a detective.'

'And now G.b, you were in heavy losses, you thought I couldn't find the theif so you'd have to clos. YOU THE HELL STEALS CANDY EXCEPT FOR A CANDY-LOVER'
G.b ran out. Fluffy opened the door for him.

'WHY THE HELL DID YOU OPEN THE DOOR?' ZIMBA SHOUTED.
Soon G.b fell off a cliff.

In the burial-
G.b wasn't dead, fluffy throw a stone on his head making him get up.
Now he's in jail for 2 years.

SOON-
A new guy came in town.

He arrested Zimba, G.B said- WHACCHA IN FOR JACK?'
"     "          NAFF! "     "  "   "   "             "    "   BILL" "
"     "           FUZZY "   "  "    "  "              "   "   JILL " "
"      "            WOLFY "   "     " "                "  "   JOHNNY" "
"       "             SNOVVY  "    " "                    " "   DICK  " "
"        "                TODDY "   "  "                   " "   BOB  " "
"        "              PRETTY    " " "                     " "  CHIPPER-CHAPPER ""
Finally he arrested Fluffy, G.B said- WHACHCHA IN FOR FLUFFY(cuz you don't have a nickname)?
'OH NOTHING JOE!'

I'm confused..........

wth............ I got lost at rolled his chair and was lost the hole way through >.<

O.K here's another one, I'll add more to it later-

                                         THE FIRST CASE


CHAPTER 1

There once lived 4 friends, Fluffy, Zimba, Fuzzy and Wolfy.
Wolfy, was serious, he was a wolf.
Fluffy, was a comedian type guy, who was serious and intelligent at times. He was a Dalmatian dog.
Fuzzy, was a small mongrel, half of a full grown dog, he was tricky, just like a fox.
Zimba was an action-packed lion teen; he had only a small beard and not a full-grown one.
Now, these 4 friends were on a vacation to the Gir Forest in Gujarat.
They were in their underwater animal-submarine, just to be protected against humans.
Fluffy, was reading a newspaper which wrote:

There was an apparent death of Mr.Yoks, the bull.
It seems that he was killed by the ferocious lion, Mr.Claws. But the interesting part is that Jojo, the monkey clown has been getting threatening notes from an unknown writer.

Question?? What's the point? It sound like a children's book, with adolesent vocabulary.

DUH!

Who'dyo think i made it for, wolves?