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My first sprite
« on: February 06, 2010, 08:30:06 PM »

  • here is my very first custom sprite
    « Last Edit: February 06, 2010, 09:23:08 PM by manyymuncher »
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    Re: My first sprite
    « Reply #1 on: February 06, 2010, 10:26:35 PM »

  • Looks good : D
    But if i had any qualms with it, it would definetly be the shirt...it lacks..shading?
    I think?
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    Re: My first sprite
    « Reply #2 on: February 06, 2010, 10:27:29 PM »

  • ok thanx i will try to work on that
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    Re: My first sprite
    « Reply #3 on: February 07, 2010, 02:01:47 AM »

  • Apart from being a tiny bit choppy, it looks pretty good!
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    Re: My first sprite
    « Reply #4 on: February 07, 2010, 02:18:01 PM »

  • GOOD JOB, MAN.
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    Re: My first sprite
    « Reply #5 on: February 07, 2010, 07:17:05 PM »

  • I like the hair.Very good for the first one ;D
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    Re: My first sprite
    « Reply #6 on: February 08, 2010, 11:57:50 AM »

  • there shouldn't be -that- much of a color difference between the front and back foot in the forward animation, and on the sides the foot opposite us should be darker than the one in front, not lighter, and the shirt needs some shading.

    Oh yes, also you're missing a frame of animation in there.

    But very good job for a first sprite, keep at it.

     

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