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Backround Story


characters

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Name:Ryushin
Age:22
Gender:Male
Personality: Lazy & comical, but can be serious.
short Backround: Abandon by village, picked up by army and trained to be perfect soldier.
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Name:Aourei
Age:25
Gender:male
Personality:Mostly serious untill he gets a drunk, never knew his parents.
Backround: Part of malitia that found Ryushin, was his master for basic training.
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Name: Stella
Gender:female
Age:21
Personality:Stuck up/ stubborn
Backround: has a tramatic past and would rather not talk about it.

Name: Kairei?(stillthinking)
Gender:female
Age:25
personality: hyper
Backround: Abandon as child, brought up by mage, she got stronger then her master so she searches for a stronger magic trainer.'

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Name:Milatchi?
Gender:male
Age:36
Personality:overconfident
Backroud: survivor of the war now works as a merc.

Name:arei?(stillthinking)
Gender:female
Age:26
Personality:?
backround: was living peacefully in forest untill war.

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This is all I have for right now I just started to work on this about a week ago and want some feedback good or bad    :alright: ...

If you have any questions then email me at Pochi234@gmail.com you can also send ur comments there too if you want to.

« Last Edit: August 05, 2007, 08:31:09 PM by Yukimora »
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sry for the double post...but i could really use any feedback on this although i will make it for my own exp anyway i just want to know if u think its good or not.
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The story sounds great! The mapping on the first map seems a bit repetitive,
The mapping on the second map looks good, but I found a bit of an error.


As you see you will be able to walk over a wall. (look at the arrow and the boxes)
Just to point that out.


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Alright i'll work on that thx for the comments and info and just to say it char pics will be up soon ;8
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looks like a good start, but remember, use .PNG files for
screenshots, not .GIF, they look better.

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Now do you know who I am??
the mapping is just a little farfeched.

Other than that, good luck.

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alright thank you guys so much for the comments i'll keep working on my mapping skill as well.
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No.. i think he some sort of Midboss
i just added two char pics and need feed back and someone who can paint/ color them

Stella is done by Kairei on the fourms and Aourei is done by kaitenshin.
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Go away Hakumen...
Keep up on the good work, son.
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In the first screenshot of the double deck house, I would have made that differently instead of a box like maybe:
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No.. i think he some sort of Midboss
o_0 that looks awsome thx im not the greatest mapper but i'll try something like that

im still opean to anyone whos interested in coloring the pics and any more feedback. ill PM the info on the pics to you.
« Last Edit: March 01, 2007, 12:55:20 AM by Yukimora »
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No.. i think he some sort of Midboss
added 2 more charcter could really use some feedback... the maps i have changed but i havent posted up the updated ones.
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No.. i think he some sort of Midboss
hmmm triple post... thats bad... ok i put up a updated map and a battle preveiwi could use some type of feedback since i uped the maps it dose seem empty in the top left corner to me but they just went trough a war and are now starting to rebuild...
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Paradoxial failboats are cool.
Hmm, looks mediocre. Try adding interesting elements into your game. (Such as skills), or have something else to spice up the game. That just my opinion, but if you just make a bland thing....It's not really fun to make.
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Yukimora, don't you have a demo for this?
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No.. i think he some sort of Midboss
O i did but it was incredibly short and ive kinda put it on hold till i finish TwinEdge with kaitenshin since it was one of my origanal projects(we both came up with it).
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This looks great, I love Aourei and Stella's design!

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Zomg, Aourei's weapon looks like this 3D model I made years ago!:

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Damn, that's nice. I think you'r mapping s good (compared to mine, like.)
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LOL at Kairei.

The game's looking pretty good, but fix the pixely white outline on your battlers plz.

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No.. i think he some sort of Midboss
ya im still working on that... it doset seem to want to go away and thx alot for the feedback ;D
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Is a demo out?
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No.. i think he some sort of Midboss
not yet sadly but i am expanding what i have of the story so i will be working on it alot more :bean:
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